Secret Admirer
August 12, 2012
The evening grows colder now, as the last light from the setting sun fades from sight. She looks at the water as the fog starts to form its thick blanket she sighs, it was clear to her now that he wasn't going to show. She starts to walk away when a hand touches her sholder her heart thumps, it was him the one she has been waiting for the identity of her secret admirer would finally be revealed.
By Mandi Bolyard Copy Wrighted 7/3/12
Posted by kevinking on December 14, 2012
She blushed and looked at the stranger and was rather taken aback. The secret admirer was not what she expected. The man was not her secret admirer- he was a middle aged Chicano wearing city park attendant overalls. "Senorita, the bench you were sitting on was just painted." the attendant politely winced.
Posted by mandibolyard on December 29, 2012
Hahaha well darn not only did her outfit get messed up but it wasnt the guy she was hoping for ...Sorry it took me so long to see this.
Posted by zpawpaw on December 14, 2012
Well???? :)) Great read!....Jerry
Posted by mandibolyard on December 14, 2012
Thank you =) ..I'm still thinking about what I'm gona do with this and where I want to take it.
Posted by morraha on August 16, 2012
YOU TEASE! Hehehehe. Well done. ;)
Posted by mandibolyard on August 17, 2012
Who me naaah lol ;) Thank you =)
Posted by frederiqueroy70 on August 16, 2012
TALK ABOUT CLIFFHANGER ENDINGS ;-) VERY ROMANTIC!
Posted by mandibolyard on August 17, 2012
Thank you I might do more with this =)