Ever After
July 05, 2012
Someone there to feel your heart
Instead of just its cage
Someone there to love your mind
The you that does not age
That is what's important
Not the clothes you wear
The car you drive or house you own
Or styling of your hair
At end of day when all is done
And the moon shines bright above
Someone to touch your heart and mind
Ahh - now that is love
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Posted by frederiqueroy70 on July 05, 2012
And maybe then you can shed your armor, romantic heart, warm soul, and return to being a farmer.... ahem.... well, I always did suck at rhymes! Excellent poem, a lovely read. I hope to see this in the XPRESS!!!
Posted by blacknight on July 05, 2012
Thanks fred - and isn't it odd that so very few words rhyme with love, but tons there are to rhyme with hate..
Posted by frederiqueroy70 on July 06, 2012
That's so true! I hadn't realized. I hear "orange" is a tough one!
Posted by terrapanthera on July 05, 2012
Instead of just its cage ... that moves me. The whole poem does, but that especially. xx
Posted by blacknight on July 05, 2012
Thanks miek - glad you liked it!
Posted by swanthief on July 05, 2012
★ ... since I don't have the clicking option. A wonderful write Phil. The shell it changes but the 'us' inside is the true 'us' ... not the superficial. It's what we all should be loved for.
Posted by blacknight on July 05, 2012
Thanks Cathy!
Posted by magpiemagic on July 05, 2012
It is indeed. Now, any idea wher to find it?
Posted by blacknight on July 05, 2012
in the most unexpected place and time