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In Un' Altra Vita

In Un’ Altra Vita

In another lifetime, I loved you once –
in a sparkling nebula of promises
where my dreams revolved in orbit
around the superheated sun of you,
and I was but a dimmer moon,
a pale reflection
of your brighter light.
It was you who made me shine
with a joy that made me radiant.
But the strong gravity of loving you
has pulled me out of orbit now
and I am melting Icarus.

In another lifetime, I loved you once
on an endless emerald sea of hopes,
the tall sails of my ship burnished to bronze
in the blazing glow of our love’s sunset.
This love that once set forth so gallantly
has foundered on the rocks of time;
those islands of once happy memories
are now completely circumscribed by loss.

In another lifetime, I’ll love you yet again.
The ebbing tide will rise once more,
the sea will give up her lonely ghosts,
and the goddess moon return to shine.
Though I must let go of what hopes I had,
there are more dreams to be born among the stars
and upon the gentle currents of moonbeams.
Such timeless desire will sail forth once more
to new explorations of love’s bright shore.

© Lianne Schneider December 2011

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Posted by ramonfernandez on January 01, 2012

I could favorite this 100 times over. The words speak to me on such a deeper level.

Posted by lianne on January 01, 2012

Thank you my darling Ramon - oh how I've missed you! I'm so glad you can read beneath the surface of the words, dear friend. I know you know what I meant. xo

 
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Posted by frederiqueroy70 on December 30, 2011

Congratulations on your well-deserved feature! You know, sometimes I like to imagine there are alternate universes, and each time we make a decision more split off, which means there are versions of you and I living different lives, loving different people, etc, etc, etc...

Posted by lianne on January 01, 2012

Oh I'm very sure there are alternate universes Fred - and if not that, then at least that we have lived before and will live on again...that the "I" never dies but returns in some new contract to learn what we did not quite get right this time around. And I think that we are all connected so it's inevitable that we will meet again. Thank you so much Fred for being the friend you are. Happy New Year. xox

 
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Posted by pegeen on December 30, 2011

Beautiful!

Posted by lianne on January 01, 2012

Thank you so much Pegeen - how lovely of you to stop by and leave such a lovely comment too. Your own work is just divine!!

 
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Posted by rodeorose on December 30, 2011

CONGRATULATIONS YOUR WRITING HAS BEEN FEATURED AT THE BLUE FRIDAY NYE LOUNGE!!

You are invited to post your comments and your Work at the link to the BLUE FRIDAY LOUNGE in the next 48 hours, and join us in some fun at weeks’ end among friends at BLUE Group!
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Posted by lianne on December 31, 2011

Thank you so much my dearest Rosie - you can't imagine how much this means to me...some features mean more than others. I know you know how that is!

 
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Posted by lindamorgan on December 28, 2011

VERY OUTSTANDING!!!

Posted by lianne on December 31, 2011

Thank you so much Linda - I'm so very honored. xo

 
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